Brief CriticismPosted: January 27, 2014
After our presentations we formed into small groups to review each others briefs that we had just proposed in the presentations. The aim of this was to write the best brief possible that meets the standards.
I now re-wrote mine to say:
“To re-design/improve the existing train carriage/set for commuters to make it a more efficient service. This must still comply with all British standards for train travel but change the way facilities are currently provided. The solution must give them a better sense of value for money along with relaxation and comfort when travelling.”